“Hello” “Hi” That is how everyone starts
A relationship: something that excites me
Something that seems easy, but in real deals
hardest thing; life-long task for you and me
I used to be open and welcoming,
wide open for girls and guys to look in
But it was foolish of me, not understanding
what problems I was placing myself in
heart was scratched, cracked, then broken in half so
I had to take time to heal my heart, dying
to smile and be joyful again although
it was never the same as beginning
I hesitate and take twice longer to
think, reach conclusion, but rethink once more
That's just me. How relationship and you
shaped me and changed my heart into a stone
a stone as cold as winter morning air
still able to heat up once placed just right
by another, a hotter stone, that is
willing to warm and love with the troubled
(Ballad)
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ReplyDeletegreat ballad :D, in the first stanza, does "starts" and "deals" rhyme? in the 4th stanza "more" and "stone", and the final stanza.(or did you mean to do that on purpose?) Love the picture :D but it's such a sad ballad D: I really like it though. I feel empathy for whoever is the subject of this poem. Good job on expressing their emotion. Hope you don't feel too sad like this though :)
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