Nature #1:
Only dim light shines
as if it shows compassion
When flood left nothing
Nature #2:
Long day is over
Sun shuts its light then takes rest
Perfect part-time job
Nature 3:
It's only through trials
that you grow tall and healthy
Crops before harvest
Daily 1:
Two minutes to bell
Sprinted and flew into class
"Sorry, you're tardy!"
Daily 2:
Run, run! No man yet!
Steal and snatch, there's a lay-up
Oops. Opposite hoop.
XD the daily 1&2 just cracked me up! I was just like "Aw that just sucks." Nature 1 was very strong although it was short. Yup, floods are really disastrous. in nature 2, I think the 2nd line is 6 syllables. nature 3 reminds me of that old saying 벼가 익을수록 고개를 숙인다 (sorry, I don't know what they say in English) Great haikus :)
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