Sunday, September 26, 2010

Three Little Pigs- Voice Writing

Dear Judge, I stand before you today being accused of attempting to kill the three little pigs. Please know that I am innocent! I was not trying to harm them; you know we get along so well. I was visiting their homes one afternoon for a tea time and they mistook my intention. In addition, I want to say that I was actually the one who got hurt. I ended up in boiling water and it was because the pigs tricked me together. I am the victim!
Firstly, I visited the first pig's house. I was trying to make him happy, so I dressed up as a lamb. Once I reached pig's house, I started having sneezes; I think I have straw allergy. When I sneezed real hard, the house blew away. I was so sad because my lamb costume was gone too! Then, I went to the second pig's house.
See, I was really bored but no one was home. I decided to wait for the second pig to return. And then, I was reminded to practice my oboe for band class because I recently started to play it. When I breathe in a lot of air and then let it out slowly, next thing I knew was that the house was gone. I was still bored and no one was there to play with me. I headed to third pig's house.
It was at third pig's house that I realized the pigs were playing a trick on me. They were all at home but did not let me in; they teased me that I will never find a way in. So I went through the chimney. I was so happy that i finally get to play with my friends when I started to feel something hot underneath. I fell in the boiling water that was set on the fireplace. I got burned all over myself but understood because I thought that they were preparing a hot tea for me. Guess what happened next? They kicked me out of the house and I am now here being accused of trying to kill the pigs! It is not fair because they tried to kill ME!

1 comment:

  1. Very strong ending! I think the sympathy got a bit lost in the middle of the piece.

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